Prompt: During brainstorming, one idea usually stands out. What is the most interesting or strongest idea you came up with for your essay, and what made you choose it over the others?

 Prompt Response:  The strongest thing that stands out to me is Cheryl's mental health, shes gone through real live events where it has dramatically changed her. Her mother deeply impacted her, Her marriage, Her drug use, The strong sense of yearning to be loved but couldn't receive it due to other people's actions that are out of her control. I choose to go this path within my essay because mental health wouldn't exist without people. I personally understand how one's death can impact your life, knowing that you cannot do anything about it once it is done. I also like to think that without the hurt that everyone has gained over their life, they wouldn't be who they are today.  

Summary: March 10, 2026, In class we were coming up with topics and ideas to write our essay on. 

Reflection: I strive to be the best that I can be everyday in any way possible, for the people around me and so that I can also get the very best of me. 

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