Prompt: Writing is a process, and the first draft is rarely perfect. Strong writers improve their work through revision. After reviewing and revising your literary argument paragraph, what changes did you make to strengthen your writing?

 Prompt Response: The type of changes i do to make to help me straighten my essay would be self-motivation. I always tell myself that I can do it and I can find better and I can do better, which then I take up the energy that I can and find better ways to word and to find better evidence of the text to make my claim sound stronger. At the end of the day I know I can always do it and I know I can always do better, to prove not only myself but to prove to my teacher that I have a strong sense acknowledgment and that I don't have wasted potential. 

Summary: March 5, 2026. working on a first body paragraph on our same based off the book "Wild" by Cheryl strayed. 

Reflection:  I strive to be the best that I can be everyday in any way possible for the better good of my mental, physical, and emotional health, and so that the people around me can also get the very best of me

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